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A Member is revamping his online dating profile and would love to hear feedback from the WOMEN of NJYP! Post your comments below.

Alright ladies; next up for bid is lot #481 a rare gentleman in today’s age that goes by the name Mr. X.   Born and raised at the Jersey shore he now resides in Bridgewater working in the healthcare industry managing pharmaceutical events.

He has visited nearly half of the US states as well as several Caribbean islands.  Although not yet having the opportunity to travel around Europe he hopes to plan that trip with the right companion.  Two of his biggest passions are spending time with family and riding motorcycles. On summer weekends he can often be found at his parent’s house boating, jet skiing, or anyplace near the beach.    There will rarely be a time you aren’t shaking your head at or busting a gut laughing when around him. (Maybe you already realized considering I wrote this like an auction bio!)

I’ve been referred to as MacGyver like, a jack of all trades and also a romantic. My quest for cooking or finding great cuisine is limitless.  If you ask, it’s likely I know a good place to eat in right your neighborhood.  Food is always best when paired with a bottle of wine or craft beer, another area I enjoy experimenting in.

In search of a woman that will enhance my life and can build a relationship alongside.  An ideal match would be another do-it- yourselfer romantic that loves to be silly, engage in intellectual conversation, plan amazing dates, and also a bit of a wino/foodie.   If I sound like the kind of guy you’re after here is your opportunity to bid and snag a date!

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Permalink Reply by Edward on January 13, 2014 at 9:51pm

Well I'm no woman, but I'll admit that I could always use help on refining and revamping my profiles to get higher quality responses (in addition to more responses), but more meaningful ones. I think this is an issue that many men face.

I'm wondering, and I wouldn't mind hosting, if we were to hold an event where we work on each other's profiles and take notes--boys on girls and girls on boys. Something where there was free wi-fi so we can either take and share notes or edit right there.

PS - I think as it is it's written quite well. But then again, what would I know? I'm just another guy that feels for a brother and recognizes something good.

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Permalink Reply by Pam on January 13, 2014 at 10:10pm

I think it sounds pretty good. Well written. Tells about himself and what he's looking for. All with an upbeat attitude and some humor.

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Permalink Reply by Katie on January 18, 2014 at 7:49pm

I think it sounds great. He describes himself and what he enjoys doing as well as what he's looking for in a woman. I also like that he shows he has a sense of humor as that is very important to a lot of people.